Nice work on this! One thing that comes to mind is that I would have liked to see her hips have more momentum going left or right.. and the speed increased. It seemed really slow compared to the music and the zoom in's were really blurry. So maybe your image was too small to zoom in on or as another review mentioned try vector..
Way fucking awesome!!
I think that you've got the panty shot thing down. :)
The perspective in the back arm needs some work... it also almost looks like its totally off her body. The size of her head makes me think it should be closer to her head. Also I would recommend grounding these girls. As it is they are just floating in the air. Try putting a shadow underneath them or a horizon of some sort.
Keep it up. :)
Good Stuff! I really like the simplicity of it. I like how clear the lines are and the shading. Everything is crisp yet you don't lack depth. Nice Job! The only thing that I would have liked to see was a little more of a background. However really nicely done.
oh well thanks for the review, and yeah i dont really like to do big flashy backgrounds (unless its a part of the artwork) because i think they will just distract from the characters
This is really good. I think you've captured "innocence" really well. I almost feel as if the snow that is up over her toes should highlighted. My personal opinion is that the dark line draws your eyes to it and makes you lose depth. The foot to the right of the image looks a little flat as well. I could be wrong, but just my thoughts :) Also, I think you've done a beautiful job on her face! Its really pretty!
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