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Nice work on this! One thing that comes to mind is that I would have liked to see her hips have more momentum going left or right.. and the speed increased. It seemed really slow compared to the music and the zoom in's were really blurry. So maybe your image was too small to zoom in on or as another review mentioned try vector..

Way fucking awesome!!

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I think that you've done a really pretty job on her face and hair. The shading you have in her chest, arms, and legs seem good and give the depth needed.The hands almost look as if you've forgotten to finish them. Her face is cute, and sweet and I think you did a great job on her shoes too. II would probably do a more muted background color for the leaves and everything because she almost gets lost in it as her dress is a similar color. Personal thing I would recommend... but I almost think her wings should sparkle some in the sunshine. :)

I think that you've got the panty shot thing down. :)

The perspective in the back arm needs some work... it also almost looks like its totally off her body. The size of her head makes me think it should be closer to her head. Also I would recommend grounding these girls. As it is they are just floating in the air. Try putting a shadow underneath them or a horizon of some sort.

Keep it up. :)

Good Stuff! I really like the simplicity of it. I like how clear the lines are and the shading. Everything is crisp yet you don't lack depth. Nice Job! The only thing that I would have liked to see was a little more of a background. However really nicely done.

bocodamondo responds:

oh well thanks for the review, and yeah i dont really like to do big flashy backgrounds (unless its a part of the artwork) because i think they will just distract from the characters

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